I got both positive and negative feedback from my colleagues, teacher, and friends. I found it very useful to see a second opinion, and sometimes they realized some things I couldn't have seen without them. What everyone appreciated was the constancy of the colors, the font, the background sound and the smooth movement. The initial song that I chose for the first scene didn't please everyone's ears, and I decided to change it as I realized it was a bit too aggressive and high pitched. What also stood out for a few people was the length of the shots with Francesca, thus I shortened them. The plot of the opening was a bit confusing for some people, so to avoid that, I added the voiceover and added the clip of KL looking at Alexis once again after the hallucination disappeared, to make it more clear that she's not real. As I applied most of the things people reported could be changed, I also stuck to some things that I thought were right. For example, some people were not agreeing with me attaching the 'She's staring at me' part of the narration to the shots of Francesca but I found it necessary for the development of the story.
Conclusively, I believe that feedback is a very important, it should be taken into consideration and shouldn't be taken personally, as it's an objective view of someone's work and genuine tips on improving it.
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